Rewriting my Verse

I was assigned to rewrite the lyrics to this verse of the original song:


When the blazing sun is gone
When there's nothing he shines upon
Then you show your little light,
And Twinkle, twinkle, through the night.


These are the ideas I came up with:

When the fame and fortune is gone
In which your stardom shines upon
Your eyes go for what is in sight
And lights the stars up in the night
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When the sun is high and you are gone
There's no need for your shining song
But later its another night
When fame is what lights up your sight
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Into the night and you are gone
Straight to the place where you belong
You are what glows in the night
Your shining rays of silver light